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We slit out wrists last Tuesday
Second hour past dawn
It was no new revelation
But the thrill of introspection has always drawn
The cat made herself scarce, the bats
Made no breath of air
As we slammed our sodden hands together
Over a thrice-stained wicker chair
The splatter was kind enough that day
To hide the blistered blemish of your face
While in my nakedness I drank the warmth
And savoured sweet the taste
We watched the blood condense and falter
Its questing stayed by the kitchen floor
And my O and your B positive
Slipped softly out the kitchen door
(Holding hands forever more)
©2005-2009 ~sekatsim
:iconsekatsim:

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I just wrote this on the train to NY.. kinda liked it. Tell me what you think :)

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:iconaporcelainyouth:
I already told you what I think, but I'll say it again cause you're one of my favourites, hehe. I like it! It's so gory, but not really...just a great twist on poetry. Plus you used the word thrice, so bonus points for you :)

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"You can't wait for inspiration, you have to go after it with a club." - Jack London
:iconsekatsim:
:hug:

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When I give food to the poor,
They call me a saint,
When I ask why the poor have no food,
They call me a communist
:iconsmidstovic:
Twisted yet meaningful... very well-written.
:iconladykonstantine:
pretty good, I like the ending

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~ Lady Konstantine ~
:iconsekatsim:
Thank you =D

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When I give food to the poor,
They call me a saint,
When I ask why the poor have no food,
They call me a communist
:iconsekatsim:
Yay, the Lady speaks :)

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When I give food to the poor,
They call me a saint,
When I ask why the poor have no food,
They call me a communist
:iconnothinisworthit:
this is cool :D

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life is pointless to live if you are alone.... :lonely:
:iconsekatsim:
lol, ty :)

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When I give food to the poor,
They call me a saint,
When I ask why the poor have no food,
They call me a communist
:iconarsonique:
Wow...thats really good.

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